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January 20, 2009
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  • Mood: Not Impressed
  • Listening to: summer breeze-seals and crofts
  • Reading: the odyssey
  • Watching: inauguration stuff
  • Eating: pizza pringles (self loathing i know)
  • Drinking: water
Ok. I am currently in preparation to photograph Veronica A. at the take your time exhibit on display at the museum (hopefully that'll be allowed) I had planned to do it today, but complications with other work interfered. Hopefully this will happen within the next 12 days or else I intend to abandon the project completely.
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~hippopotomi Jan 20, 2009  Student Photographer
i love your mood! and i'm reading the odyssey too!!!! So, shyes.
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:iconnny13:
fukethailand, check this out immediately:

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Mood: Aroused ~hippopotomi Jan 20, 2009  Student Photographer
You may not want my thorough notes, but you shall receive them.
I watched it twice, once for pure enjoyment and once for scrutiny.

This is so wonderful! It had me smiling the whole time and humming a bit too! Although, at points you had me laughing for all of the wrong reasons.

For example: the water fountain seen was inexplicably ridiculous, and if you are desperate to keep it you may play with the colors.

I love the cupcake shots, the flowers, and I positively adore the part where you are walking and looking down at the ground, although i think you linger at the window shadow for a few seconds too long.

Which brings me to my next order of business, lingering.
I understand that you may want to start slow at the beginning, but you had a few shots that dragged on past their welcome. The opening scene of the candle is exquisite, but you might want to cut it down a bit because it gets a little frustrating. Also, there is a time in which the screen is completely black, what gives? I wanted the video to get going, it refused, so i punched it in the stomach.

Lastly, you may choose to end on a more powerful image than your ceiling fan.

All in all, I was impressed. Due to your heavy restrictions, you have done exceedingly well and made a marvelous little short.

Though, with a few tweaks, shuffling, and maybe even a few more shots this little short could be utter perfection and yummy-ness.
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:iconnny13:
yes yes, well it isn't done but i had suspicions that the things youve said were true, but nowthey have been confirmed so I can finish making ammends with more precision now...gracias
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Mood: Lust ~hippopotomi Jan 21, 2009  Student Photographer
no problem!
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